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So this is really long for what it was originally intended to be. I just wanted to accentuate the bedtime stories. In the end, I feel like that's the only thing I didn't accentuate. I feel like I should cut out a large portion of the beginning so that I can keep this story short and...not sweet, I suppose. Sadly, I don't know where to start snipping away. I also wish I had a more dramatic ending. Or at least something with a little more impact. Overall, I feel like this is weak.

At least I got it all out though. It's been haunting me.
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IyraEMM's avatar
It's very well written & terribly sad.